尝试翻译横岗山旅游风景区介绍牌---轻点拍砖

翰震耗材

阅读了逸枫居士的翻译,深感佩服.在此,小弟献丑.个人建议,像圣母殿英文翻译成"Saint Mother Hall"或"Goddess Mother Hall"更为妥帖些,我看过在旅游中国指南英文网上,介绍山西晋祠圣母殿的翻译是用前面一种.另外原文"明（代）崇祯年间、（这）三殿亦被毁",逸枫居士译文漏掉了明朝,只译了崇祯年间,我想明代崇祯年间的翻译应是--In the Ming dynasty chongzhen years, 还有"The three temple",该是The three temples复数形式表述吧.像译文后面提到的清末民初及鄂、赣、皖这些名词，是不是首字母得大写呢？

逸枫居士

明代崇祯年代，这个是把明代掉了，实际参考乾隆年代“in the time of Qianlong in Qing dynasty ”或者“during Qianlong Period ”。至于其他的，确实指正的及时，你是对的，谢谢了

愤怒的职工

居士开了一个好头。。。赞一个。。。

四望钟山

As an evidence of Taosim being encouraged while Buddhism depressed in the history, Zhenwu Temple was built in Wuzong's time of Tang dynasty (814-846). Just as ancient civilization of China, The temple were also experienced too many disaster since its built. Till the third year of Renzong of North Song (1040) , the temple was rebuilt by Buddhist in the same location after its destruction. During Yuan dynasty, there were only three halls--Yuhuang Hall, Shengmu Hall and Zhenwu Hall remainded. There were serious social conflicts during Chongzhen's time of Ming dysnasty (1610-1614), and the remaind of temple was entirely ruined. However, the temple resilenced by its faithful buddhists. Bwtween Xunzhi's time of Qing dynasty, the temple still experienced rebuilding and redestroying. The existing temple was built between Late Qing dynasty and early Republic of China. Experienced so many disaters, Zhenwu temple was populared among faithful public of Hubei, Jiangxi and Anhui province.

必必

最后一句the letters came from hubei 、jiangxi and anhui province faith and worship it ，英文是没有顿号的，CAME应该用主动的那个分词代替吧，后面有谓语，faith是不是用动词代替和worship并用,

逸枫居士

语法没学好，“came”可能用错了，应该用现在完成进行时/或者现在时？faith应该直接去掉的，在这里逐字逐句翻译应该不妥吧！

没觉得美剧中有这么严格的要求。

小椰树

逸枫先生态度认真，为人谦虚、低调，赞一个。

咱们说汉语都有不利索的时候，要深究语法，鲁迅作品里也有讲不通的地方。至于外语，英国经典作品里，包括莎士比亚、狄更斯等人的作品，经常有没读书的人说话，那发音和那语法，大作家们为了照顾“原汁原味”，往往故意把单词按照说话者的发音改几个字母，把语法错误原封不动地照录，也没有影响经典名著的地位和大作家的声誉啊....

鹏程万里

Zhenwu temple was built in the Emperor wuzong  period  of Tang dynasty ,when buddhism was suppressed  and taoism was promoted , it was the product of taoism originally . once after it  was   in  destruction.In the  Emperor  Zhaozhen period of Northern Song dynasty （in the year of 1040）,the  buddhist rebuilt the  temple at the original place, and  all the abbots  were monks.The most buildings inside the temple were broken one  by  one, just leaving only three halls(Hall of Jade Emperor、Zhenwu temple , The goddess Hall). The three temples were also destroyed in Chongzhen years of  Ming dynasty. During the reign of Emperor shunzhi of the Qing dynasty, it was rebuilt  once  again , then   it was abandoned  several times. Now the reserved temple which was built in the late Qing dynasty and early republic of China accepts  deep  faith  and  worship  by   the letters  who  come from Hubei 、Jiangxi and A nhui province .

我改动了一些地方，但我也没法保证所有的地方都符合最专业的表达方式


。。。。。。。。。以上是我通过一个正在德国工作的网友的修改！

鹏程万里

Zhenwu temple was built in the Tang Dynasty during the reign of Emperor Wuzong, when buddhism was suppressed and Taoism was promoted , it was the product of Taoism Originally, and was destroyed once in the  zhaozhen period of northern song dynasty （in the year of 1040.    There was a Buddhist temple rebuilt at the Original place by abbot monks, other Buddhist shrines inside the temple were broken, leaving only three,  Hall of Jade Emperor、Zhenwu temple , and The goddess Hall. The three shrines were also destroyed in Chongzhen years. During the reign of Emperor ShunZhi of the Qing dynasty, it was rebuilt, and then it was abandoned several times. The existing temple was built in the late Qing dynasty and the early republic of china,  and now adays people come from as far as hubei Jiangxi and Anhui province to worship it .


你按照这个最新调的吧，这个更准确一些。
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这个是他的朋友，一个既在国外留学过，又对国学有一定的研究的朋友的修改！我反正不懂。。。懂的人可以鉴定一下

酷酷

都是好样的，给武穴论坛提升了一个档次